Sunday, June 22, 2008

The Captain - by teddy

I am the captain
of this ship.
What are you on this ship?
I'll be the captain of this ship.
Then what will I be?
I dont know what you will be ,
But I am the captain,
Captain Me

1 comment:

heidi hansen said...

Teddy -

This is such a strong piece of poetry!!! It uses strong images with clear language...and asks important questions. That's a poet's work even if he never uses a question mark. A poem always seeks to help us understand something about our world and ourselves.

The last line nails it!

Keep writing.

Heidi