I am the captain of this ship. What are you on this ship? I'll be the captain of this ship. Then what will I be? I dont know what you will be , But I am the captain, Captain Me
This is such a strong piece of poetry!!! It uses strong images with clear language...and asks important questions. That's a poet's work even if he never uses a question mark. A poem always seeks to help us understand something about our world and ourselves.
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Teddy -
This is such a strong piece of poetry!!! It uses strong images with clear language...and asks important questions. That's a poet's work even if he never uses a question mark. A poem always seeks to help us understand something about our world and ourselves.
The last line nails it!
Keep writing.
Heidi
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